Saturday, 29 April 2017
Pirate street
Hi my name is Jeff, My farther has told me about the old pirate he has found and I am going to retell the story. At that time no one know much about a pirate, he was walking and one man with a black jacket and have scar all over his face he walk toward my dad and say "This is pirate street don't ever walk here again" then my dad run as fast as he can.
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I really like your story you have used adjective and made me see how he looks like in my head.
I liked how you made it as if your father told it to you, to make your story better you could make it slightly longer.
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