Jacob, sitting on my favourite chair, listened to loud music.
"Jacob, thats my chair get off," I whined.
"Stop whining you two, Jacob take those horrible things off your ears at once,"Grandad shouted, then he whispered, " Come over here and I'll tell you some more stories from when I was a pirate."
"tell us about Black eyed Bill,"Said Jacob excitedly
"Ok," Grandad said, "thats the one who ate frogs."
"ewwwww," I exclaimed, " I just couldn't eat something so slimy and disgusting."
Just then there was a loud knock at the door grandad opened it and there he was...
1 comment:
Sade, nice idea and I really like the dialogue you have between grandfather and Jacob. Very imaginative. Read through your sentences and find where you could have a full stop and also some capital letters are missing. Can you find them?
Well done.
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