The other day I met some disgustingly dirty men at the inn, they assigned me to be their new Powder Monkey, because they had been struggling to find one. My mother, heavily crying, said her last goodbyes. I mostly said yes because I have a terrible life but also because I was terrified. As I arrived at the ship I started to regret my decision but I knew it was too late to turn back. For dinner we had, well actually I'm not sure what it was and if it was even edible, I just couldn't eat something so rotten.
2 comments:
Fantastic Phina. Very well written. You've added adjectives, alliteration and adverbs. I also like that you've added a present participle and you've varied your sentence writing.
Well done.
I really like your story Phina you have used good adjectives and adverbs.
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