Saturday, 20 May 2017
cocodie
There was a crocodile who lived in the desert called Sandile. It loved to drink lots of orange mud but one day the wide mud pool collapsed within milisecond but it caused by an evil young lady called Jedpane who has a crushed on Sandile. Sandile was so depressed and then Jedpane appeared within a delicious voice "Mr.Sandile the crocodile.... I has been a crush on you since you started wearing your seat belt so please... will you marry me" Sandile thought that she may has been the reason from the pool collapsed so he desided to suffocated himself into the sand and died.
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I really like how simple the story is but I want to know if the young lady named "Jedpane" is a human or a crocodile like "Sandile"? Something you could improve on is giving a bit more backstory such as why the woman liked "Sandile" and what desert is it on?
There is some spelling mistakes, go check it.
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