Sunday, 21 May 2017

PURPLE HAIR

Within the dark, dreaded seas, there are pirates. The pirates all were against each other; even if they were on the same boat. The captain of the boat was Irin. They named her; Purple Hair. Purple Hair was the prettiest captain they had ever had; not that they had had much female captains. One days, there was an orange crocodile trying to attack their ship but as good a captain as she was, she shooed it away with a piece of bacon cooked by the wide cook. One day, she collapsed in the water and died, much to the sorrow of her crew.

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

Very impressive Irin I think it is really interesting.

Anonymous said...

It is really fun to read because you used me as the main character but i don't really like dying.

Anonymous said...

Its a very fun and interesting to read at one point you put a capital letter in the middle of the story (purple Hair) but other than that great story.