The 1000 death is a story about a group of people fighting over a burger trophy that the god of earth gave as a reward of access. After having a war for as long as 15 years the Danish finally won and brought home success.
After the Danish return to there hometowns. A god of earth appear and gave then a burger trophy as an award. The leader of each army was arguing about who deserves to keep this trophy. After arguing for a long time another war started among them. They fought for a long time but their was no clear winner. The trophy disappear in thin air and nearly all of the Danish died and this is the story of The 1000 Death.
5 comments:
I love the story, you do need longer sentences though and it would make more sense if you used more commas otherwise great story and meaning.
I like your story and how you made the burger a trophy not just a sculpture/statue. I also like how you described almost everything in the story. To improve your story you could have less words in your story so you would have 100 words.
cool story line
Interesting concept Sophie.
Great job Sophie but next week it would be good if next week you have 100 word.
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