How does it feel to know that you are an essencial part of some random patients life? You are a pretty talented and nice person. And what makes it more inpressive is that you dont have all the tools and stuff but you still do it even without the proper tools or something yeah. I am very glad your saxraficing your own time to help others.
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I really enjoyed reading your post, I thought the vocab was very good.
Isabel, nice writting I really like it its very descriptive but for next time write 100 word so maybe you can win the competition.
Thanks for your piece, Isabel. My advice would be to proof-read after to check spelling, for example 'essencial' is spelt 'essential, 'inpressive' is 'impressive and 'saxraficing' is 'sacrificing'. This is minor though, and overall I really enjoyed your writing!
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