Dear Dr. Andrew
My name is Boo I am from Thailand, I would like to asked you about your job. How do feel when you delivered the baby out from the mother, do you feel happy to help others or do you feel sad. Why do you choose this job, is it helped others makes you happy and happy to see the baby that has been born. If I can, can I go visit you and watch how you work. I want to know how it feel to see the baby has been born, your work very interested me please do your best until the end.
From:Boo
3 comments:
I like your post but be careful with the tense of words.....:) :)
thx
Thank you for your piece Boo, I really enjoyed reading it. I like the clarity behind your writing and how you make it evident your focus is on Andrew's feelings and emotions!
Try to be more careful with your grammar, punctuation and tenses. For example, if you are asking a question it is a question mark you use not a full stop - this just makes it clearer for the reader to see when it is a sentence and when it is a question.
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