Dear Dr.Andrew
I know its hard for you doing your job. How does it feel to know that there are many people suffering in the world? What got you into your job? Do you like it? Do you feel emotional sometimes? I wonder whats going on inside your head? How many places have you gone to?, must be many. Is it stressful or depressing realizing your far away from your family and other people you love or loved. Is it difficult for you to live in this situation? Do you love/like your job? How do you feel after you've accomplished what you hoping for? All I´m saying is that you should stay strong and keep doing what your doing. Do good, good comes back to you and gives you luck. Your a lucky man to have this job you get love you get care and when you don´t , don´t worry cause there are many people in the world now who need your help so keep doing what your doing and make the world a more calm and peaceful world.
Sincerely, Jess
3 comments:
Great job lots of description, but you should check how many words are in your post.
I really like how you feel about his job keep it up Jess
I really love how your feelings and emotions shine through this Jess! I really agree with your thought process and the "do good, good comes back to you..." is really powerful.
It is a good mix of questions and statements, to make it more clear for the reader you could separate it into paragraphs. Also, remember that to shorten the words it is "it is" not its but "it's" (your first sentence).
I look forward to reading more of your work!
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