Friday, 16 June 2017

Dear Dr.Andrew

Dear Dr. Andrew


I know your job is a very hard job and I also know that you are very happy with your work. Does it feel amazing to make our world have more population? How many hour you work per day? . If everyone knew bout you story they will be so proud of you, I think you can be one of the best hero. I will share you story around the world and I think they will think the same as me.
             
 
In

1 comment:

Unknown said...

Thank you for your piece, In!

I can see that you are emphasising with Dr. Andrew and I really like your thoughts on his work.

I would suggest to proof-read or read out loud your work after as a way to double-check your grammar.