I know your job is a very hard job. Since you don't have advanced tool to help with. But I am glad that you are still happy helping those parents and child. It must fell amazing to see those smile from people you help. I had a few questions to ask you. Why did you choose to be doctor? How many hours you work a day?. I am very glad too that you sacrificing all your valuable time helping life.
3 comments:
Well said Poom, I liked the last sentence its a powerful sentence
Nice writing Poom, good adjectives.
Good use of vocabulary and range of questions and statements. To improve, you could proof-read your work for mistakes for example, the use of the word 'fell' instead of 'feel'. Also, in a letter it would be good to sign your name off at the end so the person knows who you are.
I look forward to reading more of your work, Poom!
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