Saturday, 17 June 2017

Dr. Andrew

Dear Dr.Andrew

I know your job is a very hard job. Since you don't have advanced tool to help with. But I am glad that you are still happy helping those parents and child. It must fell amazing to see those smile from people you help. I had a few questions to ask you. Why did you choose to be doctor? How many hours you work a day?. I am very glad too that you sacrificing all your valuable time helping life.

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

Well said Poom, I liked the last sentence its a powerful sentence

Natty said...

Nice writing Poom, good adjectives.

Unknown said...

Good use of vocabulary and range of questions and statements. To improve, you could proof-read your work for mistakes for example, the use of the word 'fell' instead of 'feel'. Also, in a letter it would be good to sign your name off at the end so the person knows who you are.

I look forward to reading more of your work, Poom!