Thursday, 15 June 2017
Dear.Andrew
Hey Andrew i'm Natty. I heard about your story. I felt really happy because now a days not a lot of people are as good as you. You are a hero, a very good hero. I think you feel very proud when you helped and saved a lot of lives. I really want to help you Andrew and make a good hospital with good material. It's really hard to find someone as good as you in this world. If more people know about your story maybe they can help. Maybe the president of that country can help. I'm really happy there is someone like this in the world. I will help share your story around and more people can help give money or give hospital materials. Thank you Andrew you are everyone's hero.
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2 comments:
Your letter is very good, you describe your feeling very well,but don´t forget to write I in capital letter
I really enjoyed reading your piece Natty. The focus on your emotions and praise for Andrew really bring out your sincere feelings and that is emotive for the reader!
My tip would be to split your writing up into paragraphs so it is easier to follow.
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