Dear Mr. Andrew, My name is Edward. I really like and admire your work and I know your work is hard and sometimes worse and I like people to be inspired by your job of helping. If everybody knows your story they might be proud of you helping people. Even you don't have the best tools you still get the job done and I'm very happy about that. I admit that you are talented person. If I were you I could never coup with your job. I am inspired by your job of helping peoples lives and you are history.
6 comments:
That was an awesome piece of writing very descriptive!!!
Nice writting Edward, I really like it it's very powerfull.
Good Little I like you little good job Edwardbrine :)
Mo, I think you should check your spelling before commenting but thanks.
Very good writing,
I found your piece very strong, Edward. The only thing I would say is to split your work into paragraphs so it is easier for the reader to follow. Also, I think you used the word 'coup' instead of 'cope' by mistake.
I look forward to reading your later pieces!
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